CHOON!
I love the sounds in this beat. Reminds me of Alias' first LP.
That 'almost flute' sound that appears in the center at about :37 is so damn haunting!
Keep doin' what you do bruv!
CHOON!
I love the sounds in this beat. Reminds me of Alias' first LP.
That 'almost flute' sound that appears in the center at about :37 is so damn haunting!
Keep doin' what you do bruv!
Thanks Mophead! Glad you like, even this lazy beat!
I also am immersed by what's dope!
Two thumbs up guys.
Can I get a credit on this as Liberal Shimmering please?
Also, if you could add my NG Handle to the project so my followers will be able to peep this I'd be eternally grateful.
Loved your flow.
I'm going to g check your other tracks out.
5/5 8/10
Make.
It.
Longer.
That is all.
I don't know man. Not really feelin this one anymore. It might get thrown in the furnace lol
It's a shame that some things never see the light of day in the circle.
This sounds like it would have been a dope drop in a cypher.
Onto bigger and better things though.
Looking forward to hearing more from you in the coming weeks Teq!
Man, I swear you could be the second coming of FlyLo...
lol I don't want that.
I'd rather tell my own story
awesome compliment tho
Besides, he ain't dead! You pick up his new album tho???
damn son...
Interesting sounds here Jack.
This could benefit from a hook.
Doesn't change up enough for me to really dig it.
Make it longer, and you'll be golden. :)
4/5 6/10
Thanks man! I'll be picking my brain for ideas in the upcoming days, who knows, something might happen!
I liked the use of the Dilla beat.
Much love to you for that.
I feel like the lyrical flow is a little too sparse though.
Never heard the words 'in space' either.
Good effort; keep on keepin' on and you'll go far man.
Peace.
appreciate the kind words but i dont need to say the name of the song to name it that its all relative
. reason i didnt use too much lyrical flow is cause i didnt feel the need to it felt better to me to do it how i did it. if you want lyrical flow check out PHANTOMS or by design.
This is very relaxing indeed.
I get an early Aphex Twin or Radiohead vibe from this.
Very interesting sounds you've got here.
5/5
10/10
To Teqneek:
I love your cadence and flow over the beat and like that you decided to continue rapping over the beat drop-outs instead of stopping like I've heard some others do. Some of the ad-libs are hard to make out, but all in all this is a great track.
To Shak:
The reason I voted 8/10 was because the beat fades out earlier than intended. If you could fix that, I'll be putting this up on my next LP.
5/5
8/10
Even with the extended beat link I sent you? Once I get your mix with the scratches and sampling applied, it'll be the finished version you hear on NG, YouTube, Bandcamp etc.
The latest link I sent you had an extra 30 or so seconds added at the end, which should be a good amount of time to work your magic and close out the track, right?
Aside from that, thanks man! It was a pleasure writing and recording over a CJ beat, and I'm sure we'll work together in the near future homie!
The track was ok at best.
It repeated too much in my opinion.
Since there's no snare, the track drags a whole lot.
Changing the melody up every 16 bars, as well as adding a hook every 32 bars would have been a good idea.
All in all;
3/5 6/10
a lot of preference in your critique, but you're right on the melody, thank you for the review.
ジョシー・スノー An Avante-garde Hip Hop producer encompassing many different influences from all corners of the world, Libby Shimmz seeks to open minds and provoke thoughtful discussions on what Music is, what it can be and where it is headed.
Age 30, Female
Musician
Kyoshi Island,Lake Laogai
Joined on 10/10/12